Thursday, February 10, 2011

Characterisation : Story excerpt on Spongebob Squarepants

“Hi Squidward!  Hi Squidward.  Hi Squidward.  Hi Squidward. “ Spongebob hollered through Squidward’s window, waking Squidward up with a shock.
“What are you doing outside my window?” Squidward screamed at SpongeBob who was smiling his big two-tooth smile at Squidward, “It’s 5am in the morning!”
Spongebob replied “Cause its opposite day! No wait it’s not opposite day!” Squidward was angry as Spongebob started singing at the top of his voice in Squidward’s room. Squidward took action and threw Spongebob out of his room and shut all the doors and windows. But even after this, somehow Spongebob still got into his room and started making chaos again.
Squidward suddenly had a brilliant plan and said “Spongebob, weren’t you never like this? Since today is not opposite day, you’re not supposed to be quiet!”
“OH! I don’t see. I shall not be quiet then,” Spongebob said after pondering for a short while.
So for the rest of the day, Spongebob became quiet and Squidward finally got some peace and quiet.

2 comments:

  1. Personally, I feel that this story is a little unrealistic as Spongebob is like a sponge full of energy, and I believe that in one way or another, he will disturb Squidward. The dialogues are nicely crafted such that they show the iritating side of Spongebob too, which I think is quite a feat.

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  2. Juo Shuen, I agree with you. It seems that Jun Hong has got a mistaken understanding about Spongebob. The dialogues has successfully created the mood, which is good.

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