This comic strip is quite funny as in the second picture, the guy that played the prank should be laughing, instead he is screaming or something. The guy being fooled by the prank is laughing, that is very weird. Also, the comic should have a nice background, to further attract people to see the comic strip. I like the way that you showed little infomation and readers had to find out what the comic meant, but the comic strip is a little too broad and people can easily misunderstand. For example, my dear friend Josiah does not even understand your comic strip, the importance of a comic strip is to tell a story using limited amount of pictures. To me, drawing a comic strip is much harder than just to write a novel.
I feel that a theme is needed to narrow down on the meanings of the comic strip. For example "Payback". Just one word can depict the story and be more easily understood.
Like Josiah, I do not understand the message you are trying to put across with this comic as one man is just saying,"Ahhhhh" while the other is just laughing at him and saying "too bad". By the way, why did one man say "Ahhh" and the other laughed and said "too bad" just because of what the first man said. It just makes no sense. Furthermore, there is no description of the comic strip.
Like Josiah, I have no idea what your comic is trying to tell. It has no background ( no setting ), no title to give us an idea of what it is about, and there are only 4 different words used ( aaaah , haha , too , bad ). Also I'd like to point out that the bald guy in your comic looks like you :D
I do not see the meaning of this comic. There's no subtitles, speeches, titles, and also how does a person SMILE when he slips on a banana skin? I'm very curious to know about that. I can understand what you're putting across, but you need a title to give a clue on what the comic is about, some dialogue to make it more realistic. I do agree with Mr "Mousehunt" (Whoever you are) about the mystery that you create but making the topic a little clearer might enlighten us greatly and also give some sense to the comic. Adding a background of maybe a garden, or a park, or a public place may also increase the clarity of the intended message.
Yeah... Jun Hong ... There is no way people can tell what you are trying to say through this comic... Maybe you should put it in the title?? Or have another box as a conclusion?? As Xavier said ... you have absolutely no setting at all... Maybe you could really use more comic boxes... DON'T BE SO LAZY
I do not understand your comic or the message you are trying to portray.
ReplyDeleteThis comic strip is quite funny as in the second picture, the guy that played the prank should be laughing, instead he is screaming or something. The guy being fooled by the prank is laughing, that is very weird. Also, the comic should have a nice background, to further attract people to see the comic strip. I like the way that you showed little infomation and readers had to find out what the comic meant, but the comic strip is a little too broad and people can easily misunderstand. For example, my dear friend Josiah does not even understand your comic strip, the importance of a comic strip is to tell a story using limited amount of pictures. To me, drawing a comic strip is much harder than just to write a novel.
ReplyDeleteI feel that a theme is needed to narrow down on the meanings of the comic strip. For example "Payback". Just one word can depict the story and be more easily understood.
Like Josiah, I do not understand the message you are trying to put across with this comic as one man is just saying,"Ahhhhh" while the other is just laughing at him and saying "too bad". By the way, why did one man say "Ahhh" and the other laughed and said "too bad" just because of what the first man said. It just makes no sense. Furthermore, there is no description of the comic strip.
ReplyDeleteLike Josiah, I have no idea what your comic is trying to tell. It has no background ( no setting ), no title to give us an idea of what it is about, and there are only 4 different words used ( aaaah , haha , too , bad ). Also I'd like to point out that the bald guy in your comic looks like you :D
ReplyDeleteI do not see the meaning of this comic. There's no subtitles, speeches, titles, and also how does a person SMILE when he slips on a banana skin? I'm very curious to know about that. I can understand what you're putting across, but you need a title to give a clue on what the comic is about, some dialogue to make it more realistic. I do agree with Mr "Mousehunt" (Whoever you are) about the mystery that you create but making the topic a little clearer might enlighten us greatly and also give some sense to the comic. Adding a background of maybe a garden, or a park, or a public place may also increase the clarity of the intended message.
ReplyDeleteYeah... Jun Hong ... There is no way people can tell what you are trying to say through this comic... Maybe you should put it in the title?? Or have another box as a conclusion?? As Xavier said ... you have absolutely no setting at all... Maybe you could really use more comic boxes... DON'T BE SO LAZY
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